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Topic 8 - Discourse structure and point of view > Discourse structure of 1st and 3rd person novels > Task B > Our answer

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Discourse structure and point of view
Discourse structure of 1st and 3rd person novels
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Discourse structure of 1st and 3rd person novels

Our answer to task B

Addresser 1
(Joseph Conrad)

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Message

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Addressee 1
(Reader)

Addresser 2
(anonymous I-narrator)

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Message

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Addressee 2
(Reader)

Addresser 3
(Marlowe as I-narrator)

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Message

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Addressee 3
(Marlowe's shipmates)

Addresser 4
(Marlowe as character)

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Message

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Addressee 4
(Kurtz)

For most of the story we need four levels of discourse to account for what is going on. The effect of this, and in particular the 'framing' at the beginning and end of the story makes it clear that this story has the kind of status that stories introduced as originating from 'a friend of a friend' - they have to be taken with a pinch of salt! At the beginning of the story, when we are more aware of the presence of the narrator we will feel as if we are 'overhearing' at third hand the story Marlowe tells to his shipmates. He addresses them, not us. But as the tale proceeds we may well begin to forget about his shipmates, in spite of the other narrator's paragraph-initial quotation marks. So it soon feels as if he is telling the tale directly to us, even though we know that this is really not the case. In other words, the right-hand side of the top three levels of the discourse diagram will begin to 'collapse' into one another as we forget about Marlowe's shipmates. So the reader's assumed discourse structure changes as the novella progresses, getting us more and more involved in the story. But at the end the frame device will restore the whole structure, as outlined above, leaving us to wonder whether we should have been believing what we have been told. Because Marlowe is the 1st-person narrator telling the tale, we are likely to want to sympathise with his viewpoint when he reports what he did or felt as a character in his own tale because of the discourse collapsing between levels 3 and 4 on the left-hand side of the diagram.


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