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SPOCA analysis and what it can show

Task B - Our analysis (line 1)

A

A

S

P

O

Yesterday

upon the stair

I

met

a man who wasn't there.

Firstly, we can note that, unusually, the two adverbials both come before the subject, and occur in the order they do in order to make the rhyme scheme work. This use of unusual syntax to conform to rhyme schemes is one aspect of what is sometimes called 'poetic grammar'.

Secondly, there is a peculiar relationship between the head noun ('man') of the object noun phrase and the relative clause 'who wasn't there' post-modifying it. Post-modifiers usually delimit the referent of head noun (for example to avoid ambiguity - compare 'the boy in blue' vs. 'the boy with blonde hair'). But in this case the content of the post-modifier tells us that the assumed referent was not present, thus preventing the usual way of 'reading' relative clauses. Note that this also produces a semantic clash between the predicator 'met' and its object. You can't meet someone who is not present (and may not exist at all). This nursery rhyme is clearly an early example of the nonsense verse tradition which includes people like Edwin Lear and Ogden Nash. [Dawn: links?] Though, given current critical fashion, if it had been written in the last ten years, it might well have been described grandiloquently by literary critics as a postmodern text!

Note that to provide a complete grammatical analysis of this sentence we would need to analyse the structure of the relative clause and also the structure of the phrases. To show you this, we have provided a 'tree diagram' of the sentence below (called trees because they have branches, rather like trees, though to be honest they look more like upside-down bushes to us!).

a 'tree diagram' of the sentence

 


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