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Thought presentation
Task A - Our comments for Cartoon 2
This
cartoon is a bit more complex.
First of all, we have what Dawn says to you presented in Direct Speech.
But then, inside that DS, we have Dawn presenting what Stef thought (so
the thought presentation is embedded discoursally inside the speech presentation).
The thought presentation itself is in the Indirect Thought (IT) mode.
The reported clause 'she's got a bug' is grammatically subordinated to
'Stef thinks', the 3rd-person pronoun referring to Stef is appropriate
to Dawn's (the narrator's) viewpoint, and the other features of the clause
are also all appropriate for Dawn's speaking/presenting context.
The effect of IT seems to be rather like that we saw for IS. Although
it tells us what Stef thought, it does it in a way that distances us from
the original form of that thought - we are presented with what Stef thought
through Dawn's words. If anything, this distancing effect is even greater
with IT than IS, because we know that, in the real world, Dawn cannot
have direct access to Stef's thoughts. So she must be inferring what Stef
thinks on the basis of her external behaviour, and then presenting that
inference in the IT presentational form.
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