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 Topic 6 (session A) - Style and Style variation > Language Variation > Task B > Our answer

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Task B - our answer to question 1

We have highlighted / emboldened the words we have changed for ease of reference.

(1) With a small screwed up protestant face and a head of black hair I was born, in a state of original sin. (2) My mother didn't like me, but who's to blame the poor woman, because I didn't look like a catholic child at all.
(3) The state of original sin didn't last long. (4) That's one good thing about my mother. Maybe she didn't like me but by god she did her duty by me and didn't leave me lying there in the clutches of the devil. (5) That very day I was taken to the chapel at the top of the town by my godmother, who my mother didn't like either, and her husband who could have been me uncle if me ma had married his brother who was handsome and beautiful and everything my dad wasn't. (6) But my mother, on a point of principle, jilted him, and he went to England with a broken heart and married an old woman and made a lot of money.

The grammar of sentence 5 in particular is also rather loosely structured, but this does not seem to be a regional dialect feature as such. Rather it is probably an attempt to indicate that the narrator is not well educated.

 

 


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