Deviation for Foregrounding Purposes - Literary examples
Task D - Structure
Imagine a poem or a short story, which, instead of being
set in the normal way, is arranged into two columns, as below:
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This kind of structure, or shape, would clearly be deviant
compared with the orthographic shape of the various literary genres, and
so foregrounded.
What kind of effect do you think such
a structure could be used for in a poem or story? Can you think of any
texts that have used this sort of structure?
This kind of deviant graphological effect would seem to suit well the
idea of two things which could in some way be seen as opposed to one
another (the representation of an argument, perhaps), or paralleling
one another (for example two people talking at the same time, perhaps
saying very similar things to a third party - parents scolding a child,
for example).
Various writers have used this kind of graphological deviation to good
effect across all three major literary genres. Alan Bennett uses it
in Part I his play The Madness of King George to indicate to the actors
playing King George and his pages that they need to say their speeches
at the same time, to help to indicate that the pages are ignoring what
their king says, as they drag him off to the blistering stool for the
fearsome treatment which the king's physicians are recommending to cure
his insanity.
Roger McGough uses it in his poem '40 - love' to represent a middle-aged
couple playing tennis (and so who are on either side of the net) and
who, though married, are emotionally apart. In this case, the text is
Irving Welsh uses it in his short story 'Across the Hall' (from his
collection called The Acid House) to represent a man and a woman thinking
lascivious thoughts about one another while lying on their beds in flats
opposite one another. In both these texts the two inner lines are both
justified, to produce a 'mirror image effect' which symbolizes the apartness
of the couples in each case, and the net in the McGough poem and the
walls separating the flats in the Welsh short story.
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